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13.1 Developing an Effective Pitch

โœ๏ธScreenwriting I
Unit 13 Review

13.1 Developing an Effective Pitch

Written by the Fiveable Content Team โ€ข Last updated September 2025
Written by the Fiveable Content Team โ€ข Last updated September 2025
โœ๏ธScreenwriting I
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Crafting an effective pitch is crucial for screenwriters looking to sell their scripts. It's all about grabbing attention, showcasing uniqueness, and positioning your story in the market. A great pitch combines a compelling logline, engaging elevator pitch, and standout hook.

To make your pitch shine, you'll need the right materials. This includes visual aids like pitch decks, as well as well-crafted verbal and written pitches. Don't forget to highlight your story's market potential by identifying similar successful projects and defining your target audience.

Pitch Essentials

Capturing Attention and Interest

  • Logline succinctly summarizes the story's main conflict and stakes in one or two sentences, designed to grab attention and generate interest (When a retired assassin's daughter is kidnapped, he must confront his past and take on a ruthless crime syndicate to save her)
  • Elevator pitch expands on the logline, providing a brief overview of the story's key elements, characters, and themes that can be delivered in a short conversation or "elevator ride" (30-60 seconds)
  • High concept refers to a story idea that is easily understood, has mass appeal, and can be communicated effectively in a single sentence (Jurassic Park, The Hangover)

Differentiating Your Story

  • Hook is the unique or compelling aspect of your story that sets it apart from others in the genre and draws in the audience (A love story set in a time loop, a heist movie where the thieves are all over 70 years old)
  • Unique selling proposition (USP) identifies the specific elements that differentiate your screenplay from similar projects, making it stand out in the market (A coming-of-age story featuring an underrepresented minority protagonist, a sci-fi thriller that explores a groundbreaking scientific concept)

Pitch Materials

Visual Aids

  • Pitch deck is a visual presentation (usually PowerPoint or PDF) that accompanies a verbal pitch, highlighting key elements of the story, characters, and market potential through engaging visuals and concise text
  • Effective pitch decks include eye-catching images, concept art, or mood boards that convey the story's tone, style, and visual aesthetic

Verbal and Written Pitches

  • Verbal pitch is an in-person or video presentation where the writer communicates their story, its unique elements, and market potential to potential buyers, producers, or agents
  • Successful verbal pitches are well-structured, engaging, and demonstrate the writer's passion for their project
  • Written pitch, also known as a pitch document or treatment, is a more detailed written version of the story (3-10 pages) that includes a synopsis, character descriptions, and market analysis for potential buyers or representatives to review

Market Positioning

Identifying Similar Successful Projects

  • Comparables are examples of successful films, TV shows, or other media properties that share similar themes, genres, or target audiences with your project (Describing your sci-fi adventure film as "Guardians of the Galaxy meets Indiana Jones")
  • Citing relevant comparables demonstrates an understanding of the market and helps potential buyers or investors envision the project's potential success

Defining Your Target Audience

  • Target audience refers to the specific demographic groups most likely to be interested in and engage with your story, based on factors such as age, gender, interests, and viewing habits
  • Clearly defining your target audience helps guide marketing strategies and demonstrates the project's commercial viability (A young adult romance aimed at females aged 13-18, a gritty crime drama targeting mature audiences who enjoy shows like Breaking Bad and The Wire)